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I’m starting to get worried now. Hamal left me waiting here, in the Caniff Gift Shop, half an hour ago. Part of me is grateful that he left me here. It’s over ninety degrees outside, and the store is at least air conditioned. That’s the only good thing that I can say about the shop.
The store sits in between condemned houses and other rot from the city of Hamtramck. The trash is rotting in the alleys. The rats in the city seem to be getting fatter by the day. I can almost taste th…
Posted by T. Jones on February 15th, 2008 at 7:59am —
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The relief is short lived. The apartment is alive with noises: two babies crying, a television’s volume is all the way up, and there is a woman shouting into a phone. She comes to the door to greet Hamal, and hug him. I know this is his sister before he gives us a formal introduction. The woman is a three or four inches shorter than Hamal, and she has waist length, shiny, black hair. Her skin is of a shade that makes her seems like she’s hiding a light underneath her skin. I like her instantl…
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